Example 2. Bad example From Edthom@easynet.co.uk
To John.Jan@planet.nl
(1) (2) Dear Mr. John Jansen,
(3) i (4) got your name by a friend of mine, Anton Berg. I understand you have re-
cently designed his new Cambridge offices.
We
(5)
are plan to refurbish our London office and Anton suggested you might be
able to help us. If so, I would like
(6)
to meet to outline the details.
I would be happy to come to your offices. Is there any chance we could meet soon?
I am away next week, but in the office from Wednesday 11
th
. Perhaps we could get
back to me with a day and time.
(7)
