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The author’s points of
view is clearly traced.
The account gives a clear vision of the author’s
position
in
relation
to
the
topic
covered.
In example below, think whether you can get an idea of what
my
Colleague C means when using a term – a gifted child.
«However, in my opinion, a gifted child - is not just a kid
who has extraordinary abilities ... and who needs education
and training in a specialized school, but also anyone who
is taught at secondary schools, is potentially gifted, that
is, has the possibility to achieve good results in learning».
To me, the mentioned definition presents clearly the position
of my
Colleague C towards the students of his class - each
student in her class is considered to be potentially gifted and
able to achieve positive results in learning.
The paper contains
plans for future actions.
The
author
outlines
future
plans
for
working
within
the
topic
of
the
account.
Together, let us reflect on the plans of my
Colleague B: «My
mistake was that I did not give detailed instructions on how the
task should be performed, so the second group did not cope with
the job completely. In the future, I will consider it carefully,
and then I think the lesson will be even more productive».
Do you understand exactly what the teacher
will do to avoid a similar situation in the future?
Let’s think what kind of semantic meaning contains
the phrase. As a reader, I clearly understand that the
teacher has identified the problem, «did not give
clear instructions», but the answer to the question:
“What I will do in the future?” is the phrase: “I will consider it
carefully.” In your opinion, is this the answer? I immediately
have a question, what do you mean by “I will consider”?
What exactly will you do in order your instructions to be
comprehensive?
I think in this case, the teacher should identify specific
strategies to address the problem. For example, give written
instructions to the task in order the students could always
have them in front of their eyes or ask students to discuss the
instructions for a minute and confirm that they understand the
task, etc.
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