Results and Analysis
There were 31 students who participated in this Journal Writing Activity (JWA) and 29 of
them agreed to take part in the inquiry. Students were assigned nine official topics during the
lessons and 252 entries were expected to be analyzed. However, mainly due to the absence in the
class, 212 assigned entries were collected. In total, however, 239 entries were collected because of
additional entries, which participants wrote outside the classroom.
In general, the study showed that journal writing activity contributed to student’s exploration
of voice, which was expressed in different ways. Also students’ perceptions of the activity turned
out to be positive, which still did not prevent them from giving some valuable comments on how
the task could be improved.
The results of the study appeared to be more extended due to a weak representation in initially
built categories. Apart from the counting of particular pre-taught expressions connected to three
higher thinking levels the classroom management aspect was slightly covered mostly in its
connection to error-correction. Moreover, there were found and documented some evidence of the
expressiveness and creativity. The separate sub-section was devoted to the description of the field
that other researchers talked about but that has been not widely defined so far. This sub-section
consisted from analysis on creativity, formatting, topic selection, and researcher’s own perception
of voice. The students’ feedback on the activity in the interview was used to explain some of the
patterns or questions occurred throughout the analysis. Finally, the researcher’s own field notes
were made during the data analysis period were used as supplementary help for explanation of some
of the outcomes. In general, the results proved previous expectations and the cases of evaluating
were observed more often than others types of higher-order thinking.
Expressiveness and Creativity
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voice and creativity [10]. This was the first aspect that was remarkable about the data. An attempt to
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Furthermore, students answered on the question about the activity itself and how it was
organized. First of all, all of the interviewee said that the instructions given were clear although one
student replied that it was very strange in the beginning not to have any limit and to write about
whatever they want on the topic. In addition, students said that it would be better to have this
activity from the beginning of school year so they could have more practice.
Above all, the participants referred to the fact that they have noticed that even in short
period they have noticed some changes in language. Some wrote that it was easier to write entries in
the end of the project whereas others did not expect themselves to be able to produce that amount of
writing. There were also students who stated that they have observed a great improvement in their
writing as it become more connected and beautiful. All this might point on the benefit in terms of
raising their awareness and confidence in using foreign language described by the scholars [8, 139-
170].
Conclusion
The results of the study have revealed that journal writing activity helped expressing
develop students’ voices about their lives by giving space to express their opinions and
demonstrating creative skills. The findings of the project let me conclude that with some
modifications this activity can be a very useful tool which may not only enhance standardized
exams preparation class, but also raise students’ motivation and awareness to EFL writing, give
opportunity for self-expression, and consequently gain confidence in expressing their voice.
The major Bloom’s Taxonomy levels which were demonstrated in the journals identified were
evaluating and creating. However since the data analysis showed low representation of students’
degree of using the pre-teaching material other alternative methods of analysis were constructed.
Thus, creativity was seen by students’ demonstration of doodling and drawing, using ellipsis, text
language and streams of consciousness. Besides, it must be noted that the journals distinguished by
some aspects that were individual for some writes. For example inserting quotations, songs and
poems, stickers; putting signatures, brackets, listing and drawing graphs and addressing the journal.
The formatting aspect was seen in the large usage of highlighting, color shift and capitalizing.
Moreover, the large use of first personal pronouns, modal verbs, questions was documented. The
participants at the same time used interjections, exclamation and imperative sentences quite often.
The topics selected for the additional entries included such areas as school, belief, family, personal
dreams and self-criticism. Likewise, the interview showed that students liked the activity and that
they would like to continue it in the future. Most of the students did expect themselves to write to
that extend and noted that it was easier to write in the end of the project rather than in the
beginning.
Practical Implications
The analysis of the results of the study permitted to work out the following advice on how to
employ journal writing activity so that it could it be better used in order to meet the aims of the
class and needs of the students. These assumptions have been generated basing on positive as well
as negative experience of the project:
1.
The activity should be hold for longer period, preferably form the beginning of the
academic year so that students would have more practice to express their voices.
2.
The pre-teaching part needs to include explaining and consolidating various markers
of modality and certainty for students to practice this knowledge in their journals.
3.
Students need to be asked to write in their entries after some discussion and
vocabulary covering in the class. It could also be some listening or reading material. This is relevant
because the participants complained on the lack of vocabulary and ideas.
4.
The journal entries might be marked only in those cases when students want to have
grammar or accuracy feedback (among the participants there is only one person who felt like it).
However it should be done very accurately and accompanied by positive feedback and comments
with providing examples. In other cases careful study of students grammar and vocabulary errors
need to lead to appropriate class content management. The assessment of the journal writing task
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should be based on students’ accuracy but need to be focused on accomplishment and may be
graded in the end of the whole period of activity.
5.
Responding to students voices might happen in the classroom by focusing on the
topics students express more concern. In addition small informal interviews might be hold
periodically where the instructor may ask about the activity or some other personal questions basing
on the entries’ content.
6.
Instructor should play of a guide and facilitator showing respect to every opinion and
encouraging students to write whatever they like. For example, it is very important not to silent
student’s voice in the classroom by laughing or allowing to laugh on particular ideas expressed by
students.
7.
Teacher may buy special journal note books to students which will raise their
motivation and gain students’ concentration on the activity.
8.
The activity should be taken approximately for 10 minutes and students need to be
asked to produce at least half of a page. Students who did not finish or have more things to write
need to be asked to write at home.
9.
There is also should be freedom for students to write whenever they want to on any
topics they like outside the class. Students need to estimate their journals as something very
personal and that is why needed to be welcomed to decorate and organize note books in the way
they like.
To sum up, the journal writing activity, while not taking too many time, gives learners
opportunity to practice their thoughts, have fun, practice creativity, and express themselves the way
they like. Above all, the activity may help monitoring students’ accuracy that is also important for
language development. The data may be studied in many other ways and there is a very big amount
of directions the inquiry might be headed for continuation. However the analyzed information let us
conclude, that journal writing activity can be very helpful tool in the given context. By little
modifications and careful teacher’s approach the activity might not only enhance teacher-students
relationships but also would give an opportunity to develop learners’ opinions.
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pe=writing
Букенбаев Адильжан Нурланович
преподаватель иностранного языка КПК
Шагатаева Зауреш Жарасбаевна
преподаватель иностранного языка КПК,
г. Костанай
CRITICAL THINKING STRATEGIES IN EFL
TEACHING AND LEARNING
АННОТАЦИЯ
Мақала мақсаты сыни тұрғысынан ойлау дамыту туралы ағылшын тілін оқыту/үйрену
барысында теориялық жəне практикалық идеяларын бекіту болып табылады. Мақалада авторлар,
сыни тұрғыдан ойлау технологиясын ағылшын тілін оқыту барысына енгізу жəне дамыту мақсаты
қандай жəне сын тұрғысынан ойлау технологияның элементтері арқылы қалай сабақ жоспарлауға
болады деген мəселелерге жауап береді. Сондай-ақ сыни тұрғыдан ойлау стратегияларын пайдалана
отырып сабақтың үлгі жоспары келтіріледі.
Түйінді сөздер: сыни тұрғыдан ойлау, ағылшын тілін оқыту/ үйрену, сабақ жоспары, ABCD
моделі, танымдық жəне рефлекторлық салалары, сын тұрғысынан ойлау стратегиялары.
АННОТАЦИЯ
Целью статьи является утверждение теоретических и практических идей о развитии
критического мышления в контексте обучения/изучения английского языка. В статье авторы
отвечают на два вопроса, какова цель внедрения и развития критического мышления в процессе
обучения английскому языку и как моделировать урок с элементами развития критического
мышления. Также приводится примерный план урока с использованием стратегий критического
мышления.
Ключевые слова: критическое мышление, обучение/изучение английского языка, план урока,
модель ABCD, познавательная и рефлекторная сферы, стратегия критического мышления.
ABSTRACT
The aim of this article is to share both theoretical and practical ideas about critical thinking
development within English language teaching/learning contexts. The authors seek to answer two questions,
namely, why to integrate and develop critical thinking in ELT, and how to create lessons including an
element of critical thinking development. A lesson plan is provided demonstrating the elements of critical
thinking strategies in ELT.
Key words: Critical thinking, English language teaching/learning, lesson plan, ABCD model,
cognitive and affective domains, critical thinking strategies.
The education focused on prospect should be developed in compliance of two principles: to
develop students’ skill to be guided in conditions of fast changing world and to find necessary skills
of comprehension and applying received information. John Dewey marked, that the main task of
education is the necessity to teach the person to think. Thus, it is necessary to speak about a need to
develop skill to think, and to think critically. Critical thinking includes skill to estimate not only the
result, but also specifically the process of thinking. Taking all aforesaid into account, we consider
that in teaching and in teaching foreign language in particular it is necessary to teach students skills
of critical thinking, ways of perception and reception of the necessary information.
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Defining critical thinking might seem difficult, especially because the term tends to be used
repeatedly without actually reflecting on its true meaning. To begin with, we can state that critical
thinking is a quality able to be developed throughout life. But critical thinking is not a dimension
just applicable to education (in the formal sense of the term). “Critical thinking is self-guided, self-
disciplined thinking which attempts to reason at the highest level of quality in a fair-minded way.
People who think critically consistently attempt to live rationally, reasonably, empathically. They
are keenly aware of the inherently flawed nature of human thinking when left unchecked.” (Elder,
2007). [1, p. 410]
However, when a foreign language is taught/learnt, even the survival language level may
require more thinking of how to communicate in a foreign language. This is because languages are
culturally determined. And as cultures differ, so do languages. Traditions and mentality reflect in
the language, its vocabulary, grammar structures, modality, etc. When learning the target language,
students need to accept these cultural differences not as a deviation from the natural way associated,
as they may think, with their mother tongue but as a fully natural, though different, way of verbal
expression within a different cultural domain. Practicing thinking critically when trying to identify
similarities and differences in how the same cliché is put in words in another language makes the
learning process more enjoyable and culturally enriching even at the beginning level. [3, p. 26-27]
Moreover, the English language took the role of the lingua franca and is used globally by non-
native speakers of English for intercultural communication. Critical thinking skills are indispensable
when practicing such intellectual traits as empathy and tolerance thus getting ready for
communication in multicultural contexts. [3, p.35]
One more aspect justifying and even requiring critical thinking introduction in the ELT class
arises due to the rapidly growing international student mobility trends and the use of English as the
language of instruction in universities around the world. Researchers of the American Foundation
for Critical Thinking (www.criticalthinking.org) argue that critical thinking is not as a natural skill
as speaking or running, it is a deliberately developed complex set of skills and features, which takes
years to acquire. [4] Similarly, a foreign language acquisition needs years of persistent training. So
practicing both simultaneously saves time and provides a synergy effect: developing the former, we
improve the latter and vice versa.
Another point of teaching or learning foreign language is the student’s work assessment.
There is more to our students' knowledge than simply being right or wrong; rather, our students
possess a continuum of knowledge with varying degrees of less or more sophistication. Hence, the
criteria by which we measure student success in our courses - our choice of classroom assessment
techniques - should vary in sophistication depending on the particular concept or skill we are
assessing. One of the most widely used ways of organizing these levels of expertise is according to
Bloom's Taxonomy of Educational Objectives. [5, p. 10-12] While planning, especially nowadays
when in some educational institutions it is required to set triune objectives (educational, developing,
upbringing) in lesson planning, the strategies of critical thinking expect simpler form of setting
goals and planning in general.
ABCD Model provides a very convenient framework for the incorporation of all necessary
components when designing a lesson. Indeed, it is useful to write each objective in one clear
sentence structured according to the ABCD model, where ‘A’ stands for ‘Audience’, typically the
students, ‘B’ for ‘Behavior’, i.e. lesson activities, ‘C’ for ‘Condition’ meaning the initial
prerequisites for the lesson activities, and ‘D’ for ‘Degree’, by which we mean certain measurable
criteria for the acceptable student performance. Writing objectives using the ABCD model proves
beneficial because in this way objectives acquire such characteristics as being specific, observable,
results oriented, and measurable by either quantitative or qualitative criteria. Three examples of
ABCD modeled lesson objectives will be provided when describing the lesson plan. [6, p. 145]
Let us take a lesson, which has been developed, for 2
nd
year college students in order to
develop their reading comprehension and writing skills by applying some critical strategies relevant
for the activities of the lesson. For that purpose, we have chosen a D. Defoe’s novel “Robinson
Crusoe”. Therefore, there are two areas of speculation, which we thought are open for our students
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to practice communicative skills of reading, writing, and talking by applying some of critical
thinking strategies. We have planned three objectives, which incorporate critical thinking, for a one-
hour lesson and used the ABCD model in the description of the lesson objectives.
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